DarknessAuthor
its good really, but ypu didnt mention how he practice his chakra control or his percentage in his chakra control in his status panel, i think you should put it on his status panel and remember from the past chapter his chakra is on mid jonin level and after absorbing a little chakra from two tail his chakra level gone up to mid kage, i think in narutoverse when you suddenly gain massive chakra your overall control when weaken a lot or a bit and you should practice chakra control. anyway keep up the good work, really enjoying reading it.