Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: One Piece Template System

alright first of all you just screwd up i mean you said that batman memories are afecting him to act alot like batman but he still keep his idiotic behvior batman would have never touched somthing related to gods without taking precoution and i bet if he searched inside batman memories he will find a way that could put an end to gods and cosmic entities so why he isn't using that knowladge and why sould he be afraid of the so caled godess she is nothing but a bug compared to real powerfull beings and above all there is thousndes of ways to kick there a****s so yeah i found his fear quite illogical thanks

Don't like how you made the gods interfere as early as this point. It removes maneueverability of your character just because of haki, which can't even bend reality. it doesn't make sense if the goddess doesn't interfere with powers like Wanda's caliber, what makes the mc special that the gods will interfere much less threaten him if he veered of the "right" path. it's a plot hole and very much unnecessary. anyway this just my two cents. Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

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