Alphachoas
This is my 3rd time reading through this novel. I only have 2 bad things to say about it.... 1 some minor spelling issues, most likely due to translation, in my opinion however. 2 The ending. I will explain it later, I prefer not to give spoilers.
I am reallying likeing the book so far and the world/charecter building you have done please keep writing. If I had to say anything negative about this book is that there is sometimes errors with the spelling of words, such as in the last chapter the demons whip turned into a wipe if you ever want someone to proof read a chapter im willing to do that for you