ExSoldierLv99
A slightly annoying mistake, the MC claims he doesn't remember the elementalists using fire but he literally saw them burning into his village when they were fleeing. Being unable to even remember stuff like that in your own story does not inspire confidence in you being able to pull off any complex or deep plot arks, and so far it's just been training and short fighting segments. No overarching goal or even advancement of their society in the background, it lacks details on how the town is or is not changing as the years go by and it makes the world feel dead since your entire focus is on the MC and his limited perspective of training and fighting 24/7.