Dashlin_King
Things to keep in mind: First of all I want you to know that everything is very good, I would have liked to see in depth the sub-plot of the sausage warriors, but I understand that it is not the main plot, continuing with this I think everything is in order, although I do not understand the fact that the king of the pralines allied himself with the samurai master noodle, I see great potential. I think the true sword of the divine tuco could come out of there, but that remains to be seen later, I suppose. Moving on to the harem, it seems pretty cool to me even though I didn't understand why the crazy monkey from the mountain-swamp joined XD I guess it was for comedy, but the background story is very good and doesn't leave loose ends that could be inconvenient In the future, going to the levels of power, it seems to me that the mentor from the beginning is as broken as possible, that is, he could only break the sacred cardboard rod and that was... Impressive, I think the main character could become very strong having take into account that mentor and Mr. Alfredo Gutiérrez who I definitely think is the masked sausage. But that's my theory... Anyway, a very good first chapter, it had everything and I hope you continue to crack