mark_kiple
I like this. You made the chapter emotional, compared to the movie that just glossed over it for a few second, showing Phastos loss of faith in Humanity and the next we see him he already have family (husband I might add, just for “the message”). Skipping the war is also a good Idea since, I feel like it was so overdone. Great chapter. 😀👍🏻
I feel like you should still focus on Pluto he is the one we have seen from the start. kinda bummed me out thinking about how I waited for the story to reach the times of the superheros and then you change character focus. I wanna see him be a neutral hero . although I understand why he can't do it because of ashram rule of no interference.
I feel like before he has a kid he should make it so that sprite can grow or change her into an adult. It seems more like a natural progression to figure out how to make a child I guess. 1. he figures out how to change the eternal body 2 . he figures how to create a child eternal that can grow That seems to make more sense in my head Excited to see what comes stories their son will go through, also when will they have their kid approximately?
questions. Is Pluto and Thena's child going to be organic or mechanical like them? cause if Pluto makes his children organic, wouldn't it be better if he also makes himself and Thena (perhaps the other Eternals as well) organic like Comic!Eternals and transfer their celestial energy/essence/soul into the new body?