I really want to like this story and I keep coming back for a few chapters hoping it improved. But it’s like listening to a really good ballgame on the radio instead of watching it in the stands. 5-10 chapters per battle of other people commenting on the battle. The battles them selves are awesome. I just wish there was a flip in the ratio of battle vs side talk about the battle. But I guess that’s why I’m a reader and not an author.