đ it's good to have this kind of chapter, but in my opinion it would be better if the characters chatting could be minimize if they weren't the main characters. We can already imagine the scene playing even without the chatting. Plus if you do that, the readers could definitely get more action and the story progress.
It has taken 7 chapters to go through most of a fight and now we are recapping the fight again along with the commentary from the peanut gallery. I would think that we could probably have done the fight in 3 or co chapters and this in less than half a chapter. We don't need a retelling of each part of the fight.