Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Konoha as the Anbu Torturer

why not give him Jubi??? it's hilarious getting sage body from the get go...

Grammar sux. The flow sux uber ballz. There is no flow, it's just an abrupt end to every sentence. I'll give this a couple more chapters before dropping if it doesn't improve.

This is sad translation. Naruto is a famous literature, didn't even bother to correct the name. It's not that hard to search it online

Eaton? Seriously?

Look! at! all! those! exclamation! marks!

system slave alert a system that works without Chakra in a naturo world

So he's an Anbu named Aoba..?😕

Thanks for the chapter!

Why don't you give him otsutsuki lineage in chapter 2? Also as a toast the MSE🙄

Is there romance???

Mc is going to be 22 years old in year 58 when the Nine-tails, Kurama, is unleashed.

If it's true what was said in the preview the author made of the story Hiruzen should be 58 when the Nine-tails (Kurama) gets unleashed, and in the beginning of the story it's year 36 so Hiruzen has only been Hokage for 19 years and Hiruzen is also 36 right now. p.s: Hiruzen Sarutobi became the Hokage at the age of 22.

Thanks for chapter

Why is the grammer so bad?

Thx

thanks for the chapter

Good🥊