Soleil_Lynx
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Is this an original work or a fanfic? Just curious
Poetic beginning of the story, and good detailed description, but always pay attention to the used of pronoun: he, she, and the punctuation mark such as, comma, dot, etc.
First chapter but I'm already intrigued.
A good chapter indeed đ„
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola