webnovel

Comments of chapter undefined of In Multiverse with WHEEL of Random things and Abilities{Dropped}.

Author liked the comment.

SirZed
SirZedLv14SirZed

If you fix your grammar the story would be enjoyable to read

Author liked the comment.

MonoKuma
MonoKumaLv3MonoKuma

Try and use grammarly

_Timeskip_000:if you point it out i will try fixing it.

Author liked the comment.

Zarc_Dragnero
Zarc_DragneroLv3Zarc_Dragnero

Writer, where are you going with this chapter, he met murderers and serial killers drug dealers, organs and ra**** in the children's prison, did you write the chapter while you were drunk?

Author liked the comment.

EternalDuccMonarch
EternalDuccMonarchLv2EternalDuccMonarch

I was honestly enjoying but I hate dxd : ( Anyways best of luck : )

Author liked the comment.

Tsu_Tsu
Tsu_TsuLv13Tsu_Tsu

thanks for the chapter 👌

Author liked the comment.

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

One2Turtle
One2TurtleLv14One2Turtle

so will his mom join the harem?

Wachdog
WachdogLv4Wachdog

This is written by a 10 year old boy with a lot of imagination. Anyway, I'll keep reading it because it's entertaining.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

paragraphs are too long makes it feel like a chore to read

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Ty

Yo_Aibo
Yo_AiboLv2Yo_Aibo

The paragraph is too long

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

👍