Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Reborn With a System!

No harem please sir.

let mc be sigma. sigma don't have time for thot. let the grind continue

thee is no problem in what you are doing author san and especially for you who is writing a book for the very first time this book is actually very good compared to 99 percent of books on webnovel or fanfiction.net, wattpad or any other platform. just don't make this book a harem and it will turn out great, because there are next to no grammatical mistakes, nor are there any of those cliché of mc vowing to protect people he didn't knew or protecting a village that he only knew from fiction and mc actually prioritizes himself above all people which is also good. so overall you are on right path, just don't ruin the book with harem and romance and this book of yours will turn out excellent in every aspect. don't mind the haters, they are gonna hate so just focus on what you want to do and on all positive reviews. good luck and keep up with the great work my friend, you will go far.

no harem please

no harem please

Your doing great in my opinion, especially compared to… other…. fanfics. Keep up the great work 👍

If your fear is having a lack of conflict in the near future because of his strength you could just focus on his relationship and make him fail there. An interesting plot could be him becoming Sasuke substitute brotherly figure. Anyway you're doing great as it is. Keep it up👍

If There Is Romance Who Is The love Intrest?????

Thank you Keep up the good work

novel is on the right track and the grammar is good which is important as the story won't be understood otherwise

you are doing good . Keep it up

Please don’t use dungeons. The world of Naruto is big and complex enough to have sufficient adversities to become strong. He is a gamer and can become stronger by training and missions.

Yo al estar viendo los comentarios de no harem Yo: si saben q lo que digan no cambia lo que hará el autor no xd? Psd:a mi me da igual si es harem o no harem la historia va bien hasta ahora

if character some how gains ability to use wood jutsu would it be water+earth=wood water+earth+yin=wood or wood+earth+yang=wood because I know some say different things.

I think its going wonderful so far. keep up the good work

thanks for chapter but please write long chapter

no harem but chose a beauty

Mc x hinata?

it's good so far!