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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Reborn With a System!

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_Sanklers
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So far it's worked, the author balances character development well, we don't see a character who only trains and has no personal life, and the way he grows in strength, I don't think we'll see an MC as strong as 'Madara' and 'Hashirama' when he is only 12 years old, as in other stories.

_Sanklers
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KoRo
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Thats a good story, please do not add harem it is not necessary

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Leylin_Farlier99
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thanks for the awesome chapter author san and Mc did it to purposely irritate sasuke right haha. anyway keep it up author san.

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Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv13Sword_1mmortal

Thanks for chappy

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_Yahweh_
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Thanks for the good chapter[img=recommend]

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JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

thanks for the chapter

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system
systemLv4system

Thanks for the chapter author sama 😊 please keep up the good work 😃

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4kp
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Thanks for the chapter

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SolomonMumuDoom
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thanks for the chapter

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medium_is_premium
medium_is_premiumLv3medium_is_premium

thanks for the chapter and will mikoto die like in the canon?

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Azoozy_king1
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Thank you Keep up the good work

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Shanky_S
Shanky_SLv5Shanky_S

thanks for the chapter

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darkcat
darkcatLv4darkcat

thanks for the chapter

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Kurdi123
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Next time do it either in Mcs or the senpais pov

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asaade
asaadeLv10asaade

author please used he or she when talking about someone, for example in this chapter sasuke answer mikoto's question "i havent seen nowa san yet" and mikoto answered back "is that so, it must been in the back". the "it" should be he or she cause youre talking about someone

Shazy333
Shazy333Lv4Shazy333

This is some good stuff. Keep going.

Ondre_III
Ondre_IIILv4Ondre_III

Thanks for the chapter

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leo26
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Man, there are no grammatical error other than the occasional she or he mistake,bro pls fix that.

blddevil
blddevilLv1blddevil

Wouldn't using chakra for a dexterity exercises handicap mc in the future? What if he had to do it without?not restraining himself is okay but showing off?