Comments of chapter undefined of The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

Thanks for the chapter, one idea I give is for him to learn an ability to know if the person is lying or not, you can make this ability be the kind where he knows the person is lying but he doesn't know which part of what the person said is a lie.

honestly I think you're doing a good job Author-kun. It's your story in the end do what you want you mentioned the map in Ch 21 and I know from other Chapters the MC can detect zombies. Does that mean the map only detects the presence of humanoid things? Is it showing allies and enemies in different colours? I think you're doing great and was just wondering if the map shows these 2 as threats or is it Xenon just having a bad feeling? anyway great work loving the chapters Amy N°1.... couldn't help myself 😂

For now I can say I love your ff. The only thing that would make your novel die is if you allow the waifus of the MC to get ra/ped. Those dudes spoke about doing that so it's a fact that if the MC is not smart enough they will get ra/ped... if that happens about 90 % of readers would drop directly . It's not a threat of any kind but I at least have read great ff in which the author allowed NTR ... at that moment I wanted the author to get a fking virus and loose his computer... It's ok to say their disgusting plans but if the MC is weak enough to allow others to step on him this way... then .. you know XD . I still hope TWD world is keps for a good ammount of chapters. If the MC is capable of multiversal travel then he needs to use this opportunity to lvl up and just in case the next world is worse.

cheers author! If I had to choose, I'd say explore beyond the places shown in the series. Like other locations that didn't search and show totally different situations. Like from a group of cannibals or something. At all, Xenon progresses well. Good luck!

Friend , I will ask you the question that everyone wants to know but does not want to write . Will Amy be raped? .if she is raped until here I come I don't like fanfics where the protagonist's couple is raped I have already read a fanfic and I didn't like it.

I like the story a lot but I am hoping that no one is gonna get raped just so that we get some character development

Que no tienen un mapa que le muestra los hostiles

wouldn't the system show on the minimap that they are neutral to bad in relation to the protagonist or the only protagonist group?

My suggestions would go along Reyserman's, because I guess most of the toxic criticism is that he's following the TWD storyline and crew, f that, he's still weak and can make use of future knowledge to establish himself and try his best to tweak anything he finds necessary, only in the worst or best circumstances he should leave, that being, the group is unsustainable to his own well being at all times for some reason or he is so strong that he has the resources to make himself a death world Santa, leader of his own group or go be a hermit.

Good chapter

nice

if Amy gets raped I'm out

could you have the mc will explore fort benning since it's an excellent place to gather resources and military equipment and since it was never mentioned in the series it would be a good plot change

Não entendi porque ele já tá pesando no pessoal do Negan, ele sabe o enredo e mesmo assim é bem inútil nisso. Ele prefere ficar com um grupo fraco e ter todos os mesmo problemas que eles tiveram em vez de mudar a narrativa. E como diabos ele não lembra do Randall, meio que foi o primeiro "vilão" que twd teve

I thank you for the chapter.

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Arent these guys the ones that attacked them at the bar in cannon? Or are they ocs?

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work