Comments of chapter undefined of Free of Fate: Hizashi Hyuga

This was really pathetic for the MC, just made him seem really unlikeable, not really a good incentive to read the rest of your fic, but whatever.

good chapter

Good

Dude Is he Hizashi or Neji cause Hizashi Sacrificed himself and Neji died during 4th Shinobi War....Also you could just get a pair of Tenseigan from the moon....You should've wished for a body to have all Naruto World Kekkei Genkai+Tota+Mora,All Naruto World Technique knowledge(Specially Body Flicker,Multi Shadow Clone,Multi Paper Bomb,Flying Thunder God,8 Inner Gates,Fused Elemental Ranged Rasengan,Strength of Hundred Seals,Creation Rebirth,Lightning Chakra Cloak,Chidori+Variants,Soul Transformation,Mind Transfer,Shadow Manipulation,Space-Time,Mind,Soul related Jutsu,Edo Tensei,Shikifujin,Fuinjutsu,Curse Seal Solving,Cell related Orochmaru Knowledge,Senjutsu,Tenseigan Mode,Six Path Chakra Mode,All ninja affinities,Yin-Yang+Kekkei Genkai+Tota+Mora affinities etc.),lastly you should choose for yourself how to create your own Artificial Tailed Beast(You could use part of Gedo Statue,Stone Gelel,Demon Moryo,Ryumaku/Dragon Veins,Zero Tails,A Part of Tailed Beast Chakra From All Tailed Beasts,Hoshigakure Meteorite etc.)

Good job👍👍👍