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Comments of chapter undefined of DXD God of gods

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BMOmk3
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ok so something that needs to be clear is what what his goal is when he reincarnated. I just reread the first few chapters to try and figure it out but it’s kinda vague. He doesn’t really have a reason to want to be there. However he did choose high school dxd specifically so it seems like he wanted the harem route. As for ideas of the upcoming story I think there is three options. First continue with atermis and eventually add to the harem (idk really how u would do this because there no lead into it, but you could make mc visit mount olympus for whatever reason). Second, make him start the canon story, like attend kuoh academy just for fun, and he can make his own club or something with ophis and alice, one idea would be that Soma and Rias recognize ophis (like recognize her massive energy) and then are confused as to whose is with ophis aka mc. Just as a way to intreduce more characters. I think this is probably the one that’s easiest to follow up, but you if don’t like the idea that’s fine. Third choice would be maybe since Ophis is involved with the khaos brigade, mc thinks they are manipulating her and he decides to wipe them out. That includes Baraquiel (i think he part of it). Then that leads angels, fallen angels, and devils to look for mc. (i recognized as i wrote this it wasn’t a great idea). Finally one that could work is, ophis and alice want to go on walks with mc right, they get bored of kuoh so u take them to go see heaven ( treating heavan like a park) from there micheal and gabriel get scared of ophis and appear in front of mc. Gabriel prolly really likes cute things and hugs ophis as she looks like a child. From there i don’t really know but its a way to introduce Gabriel (for harem). I wrote this all as i came up with it, im not saying u have to use any of these, but hopefully they can help you come up with something. I also recommend maybe rewriting the first few chapters to make the story have more of a goal. Ok that was excessively long sorry about it Cya

BMOmk3
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four options*

ScorpiusMalfoy1981
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MC can go to Heaven as he has powers of God But the MC should start collecting maids.

Wsp12_
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can he get Naruto abilities like deideas explosion release it would be interesting to say the least....

omega_5795
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continue please can you please get all the scared gear and combine all of them together?

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Armando_Almeyda
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Bueno amigo yo diria que no reinicies ya que vas por buen camino, ademas como vas esta bien, salva al clan nekomata y ya que tienes una mundo por crear crear uno para q se desarrollo el clan, espera a que se desarrolle la trama, pueden habrer fricciones con el panteon griego o acaba con un dios

Buzzard03_11
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I have never written anything, and so although it is noted that it is brainstorming without direction or "plot" I do not complain, because I guess it must be difficult, but at least I can give some advice, before writing do a brainstorm in a notepad or notes, including everything you want, For example 1- Goes to Heaven meets the Angels and becomes the God of Heaven given his energetic signature 2-Gabriel is interested in him since as he is the incarnation of the sacred and sin I suppose that his soul can be absolutely "white" or "black" to an impossible extent, and that she sees him in a "calm" or "White" state and as he is an Archangel he is interested in him 3- Go to Kuoh and meet the protagonists and extras (Shinto, khaos brigade, etc) Basically something like that, you just write down the general idea and then you break your head trying to connect the dots, in short, do planning first.