thelightedghost
Just a suggestion please don't take it personally or as an insult If the author is having trouble writing something a potentially simple thing to overcome this assuming it's not a issue of "writer's block" is to to write 2 or more "drafts" for a "scene" with different things being focused on now rather than picking one over the other it's best (in my opinion) to take the parts you need and liked most to write a "scene" you're satisfied with Hopefully this is helpful 😊👏👍