Comments of chapter undefined of Revelations @end of the world

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good chapter again

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There are a lot of errors but no one is perfect.. Still the story is quite interesting and I will keep an eye for this novel

it has an interesting story to it but It took a while before I could fully understand what was talking place. there were some grammar errors but overall it was good

hello evrybody

like my Comment please x3

Hi I apologize for putting in the segment of intergalactic battle in the first chapter which misled some readers to think this is a Star wars like story. Well it could be but we'll see how the story progresses but it was my bad to put it out so early. Sorry and thanks for reading.

hi good chap

hi there 30 chap alredy?

Hi to first chapter great book i like

mornin

good beginning

good story

hallo

best chap

good chapet again

nice book

good chap