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Comments of chapter undefined of A Witcher Tale: Ron Aydesson

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Preso aoa 15 anos que bosta pelo menos 18 até 25 anos ele estaria semlre no auge da juventude e na base da maturidade

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Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

Hm why would be take a potion that stops aging at 15 does that mean he's stuck at 15 or will he age to atleast 25 cause honestly looking like a 15 year old always is kinda gross

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TrueFamine
TrueFamineLv5TrueFamine

Dude you have to stop calling Ron she its he only he you keep confusing the two and a male sorcerer is a sorcerer not a sorceress

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The_Berserker
The_BerserkerLv5The_Berserker

he start training to be sorcerer at 8 after 12 years of training he should be 20. 8+12=20

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Wyatterp1
Wyatterp1Lv13Wyatterp1

15 should of been 20

Lord666Acedia
Lord666AcediaLv5Lord666Acedia

Bro you’ve got some pedo vibes here The guy stuck at 15 .......like what At 15 I’m pretty sure he prolly hasn’t even gone through puberty or just starting Ugh This some ugly shota Not even grown mind There nothing making him an adult

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Coldman
ColdmanLv4Coldman

Just read over the chapter once, most mistakes are gender ones. ONE proof read and all of those are gone!!

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TitanicLichChicken
TitanicLichChickenLv11TitanicLichChicken

1)The sentence about Yennifer not winning an argument about aerodynamics is confusing the way to described it. 2)You repeated “fiercest” twice when decribing fire magic and Ron’s affinity to it. 3)The “her” in the last sentence of the paragraph about earth Magic putting her at ease should be “him.” Her —>Him

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Asphyxiated
AsphyxiatedLv15Asphyxiated

Male amd female thJng again just proof read it once

PANDA10000
PANDA10000Lv1PANDA10000

Es un mago frío que hace todo por el poder verdad? O le darás recuerdos totales de the witcher y lo harás un héroe?

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter