So far I like the story but I feel these chapters need to flow more, more descriptions on how they get to places or do things. It feels very short and stuttered atm like. This happened, then this happened. We need to know the in between.
I really like the story so far, but the pov is often hard to tell or just changing rather quickly. That's really the only criticism I can really level at it so far tho so great work author-sama!
