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Comments of chapter undefined of I Will Protect You This Time

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This chapter has a lot of paragraphs that repeat, I think there’s two of the whole chapter and then three of the maids finding her scenes repeating

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You’re absolutely fine!! I hope it doesn’t come across as if I’m criticising, just want to help you find the mistakes and make the story (which is amazing) even better ☺️

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