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Here's an idea, read some of the other famous books on Webnovel. Notice how they are not cliche after cliche? Follow along that path and this novel will do better.
Hasta cuando dejaras que tenga esa personalidad ridícula del protagonista no se supone que es harem?
Why would you choose to write this novel like this? It’s beyond cliché, and cringe.
Nice chapter