Alexander_the_grey
ngl, it's a slightly rough start. lots of telling instead of showing. telling the reader he did X and telling them he did Y. it's not that fun to read, like reading a history textbook(spent a lot of time just listing facts about his ability). Plus a wasted timeskip since you immediately took the majority of the chapter to go into great detail explaining everything he did. I'm going to keep reading, but I just hope we move past these info dump chapters soon.