Comments of chapter undefined of High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic

Ok, DonnutHermit, you are falling into the trap that many fanfic writers fall into, especially the longer their series gets. Lazy writing. In the last couple chapters there are basically no actual character interactions or reactions. Your writing has changed to a style that I call "omniscient summary." This is where your chapter is basically just one big summary written from an omniscient point of view. It also wastes a lot of content. You are condensing entire story arcs into 1-3 chapters, when if written properly they could be 5-10 chapters.

Hope MC decides to do things his way again instead of this canon plot. Heck i rather have his slice of life plot rather than canon characters. Thanks for the chapter

I can see your MC wants to let others grow through adversity & not go full OP over everything because that'd be boring to us, you & the character himself. At the same time, feel free to toss in some super altered stuff in this fic, Don't gotta follow 100% to DxD plot. All you gotta do is come up with more OP enemies etc. Like how he easily dealt with the Harry Potter enemies. I honestly wouldn't mind seeing them revisit Harry & what not some day. That'd be cool. Heck sometimes I feel like it'd be interesting if Marvel stuff was included. He'd be best buddies with The Ancient One that's for sure lol.

uhh, is it only me or chapter quality lowered?

What a boring past few chapters

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Great chapter, keep up the awesome work 😍

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