Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
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be honest I thought the Mc would continue to train not fool around most of his fights he can barely win without using his strongest attack or spells or without outside force.that's what I get by reading it needs more Mc development on his character and his personal strength cause all I see is he does do much fooling around and flirt with women he find interest on like come on we are past a hundred give him some strength man it ruins the book for me when I see no character strength.now you may think but his growing stronger yes he is buy in a sense not have you read his fights he barely wins only wins but outside force or outsmarted them sometimes it doesn't work.like Indra he awaken a knew power but what does he do not train. Jesus man.
my lad I am not asking for him to be a mindless machine I am saying this Mc need strength because wasn't this all about him gaining freedom he needs strength and what high class God's Mc can barely win with Indra whose a God-king especially Susono helping him.he struggles alot like come on man he has the Immortal witch Scathach but after his training arc he didn't continue.and freedom is earned and having the strength to do what you will with your fate. do I need to go more like his fight with the Dragon in skyrim he had outside help by Ddraig he could've beaten the Dragon but no he had assistance but when he did he barely won.what next a yes Susano from Campione the guy didn't take him seriously and he got another powerful weapon what does he do ahh yes not train to find such its capacity its abilities all I see is harem and least character growth to strive to be better it is not worth people's time when you see someone with all the talent and weaponry he has to waste it.
OneeSans_Shota:Ur right he should train more instead of playing around but training mindlessly also won't do him any good the dude is already strong enough being able to fight with high God's on eqal footing, what he needs now is experience imo..
