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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Endrith
EndrithLv11Endrith

I'm getting annoyed with your fan boys author. It was a real mistake with Will collecting girls left and right like pokemons. Then they say there was nothing wrong with. I loved the story because of its progress and world building but at this point it'll become a generic webnovel harem fanfic. Hope you get your original zeal back.

Asura_Vajra
Asura_VajraLv6Asura_Vajra

Kunou:"..." Sirzechs:"..." Kunou: "...do you want me to call you 'onii-san?" Sirzechs: "...I am very conflicted."

Gintoki_Sakata_5821
Gintoki_Sakata_5821Lv1Gintoki_Sakata_5821

What are you talking about bruh I've been waiting for grandma Gremory for ages.

mainmangog
mainmangogLv5mainmangog

honestly his goddesses wife would probably kill her off regardless. artoria will look at him with cold eyes. the others wouldn't care probably but i still think grandma would get the cold palace treatment from almost everyone.

MarquisofHell1
MarquisofHell1Lv13MarquisofHell1

I can't wait see her reaction who in Wil harem Her Reactiin:

IsseiODR
IsseiODRLv3IsseiODR

Don't worry. I also liked that he is with Venelana. But it would have been better if their relationship grew little by little. Gilf Route

floodyyyyy
floodyyyyyLv4floodyyyyy

Dont worry mate so far its pretty much a minor thing in the end other than that just keep up the good work and stay well

Zeus_Sora
Zeus_SoraLv2Zeus_Sora

Sensei if you read this I tell you that you did nothing wrong, you keep writing as you do because you do it well do not pay attention to the stupidities of others, If you like it well if not nimodo that you endure because for my sensei is a good author, has my support sensei, do not pay attention to the poor commoners That they bark senselessly

Secondworldgod
SecondworldgodLv4Secondworldgod

Thanks for the chapter author-san and thx for the lewd...Well Rias has a new step-daddy, I wonder if you could do something with that....

PrivilegedReader
PrivilegedReaderLv4PrivilegedReader

I thought it was going to be a mess because it's too fast but when I read this chapter it seems like it will work out just fine. We've known that he's a hoarder from the beginning, so maybe he has the sin of greed in maximum as a devil/dragon, so you can say that it also translates to woman

FluffyHaremPlz
FluffyHaremPlzLv4FluffyHaremPlz

so he just became his dad's stepfather

kirito024
kirito024Lv5kirito024

I highly doubt that the people reading a Fan-fic of DxD are not a man of culture~ So why the Fuss~~

Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008
Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008Lv14Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008

don't worry about baseless criticism, your story is consistent with all the worlds you've approached, there are few novels in the webnovel that are worth reading, the vast majority being all nonsense cultivation and full of clichés, keep up the good work .

Pythia
PythiaLv2Pythia

First meeting with Meridia and Venelana is dead btw. Hopefully some small, very small at that, semblance of logic is still followed.

Bill_Ribles
Bill_RiblesLv4Bill_Ribles

Sweeeeeet Home Alabama~ hahahahah thx author-san btw pls add fairytail arc

SteelWolfAlchemist
SteelWolfAlchemistLv4SteelWolfAlchemist

2qq 1 am I the only one who skips most omakes and side story 2 can we get a omake of Wilhelm playing CoD with serzeks and saying he F'ed his mom

TitanLoco
TitanLocoLv3TitanLoco

Jeanne for the harem.

TitanLoco
TitanLocoLv3TitanLoco

You don't have to worry, although I feel like it was a bit rushed, it's true that not all relationships start with dates and romantic things, sometimes it can be for a moment of passion. What I really hope is that Venelana is not the first to get pregnant or at least I think she should not be the first.

Shadowknight_950
Shadowknight_950Lv4Shadowknight_950

Scientistx
ScientistxLv6Scientistx

one of the things that constantly bugged me is sirzechs and mc's mothers metting before their one night stand we never saw how sirzechs just got enormed with her or did we and I just accidently skiped ahead???