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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

ReficulsRegret
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so now we wait a couple hundred years before venelana loses love for will. why would someone who just came out of a 500+ year relationship want to go into another long one. she must have recently lost feeling for zeo, after all, they had rias and you know how low of a chance it is for devils to get pregnant so they must have been going at it for a while. the chapters have been going downhill

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ButYThough
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Sirzech: Hello Son Wilhelm: I F*cked Your Mom so Call me Daddy Confused Sirzech Noises

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lolbena
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It will be fun seeing the Gremorys reaction later. Nice and diferent way to get more shenenigans later, and now he can ask Sirzechs "Who's his daddy?" xD

Kaizel_8164
Kaizel_8164Lv4Kaizel_8164

I think this is where I'll stop. It was fun while it lasted but there's no actual plot progression and this is more like a harem collector instead. Chapters are always way too short and sometimes nothing happens.

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Asura_Vajra
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Petrolino_Ritero
Petrolino_RiteroLv2Petrolino_Ritero

What a disappointment, and wil was doing so well, developing all his relationships and he comes out with this, he feels empty, I hope you return to your essence when you wrote well and had different ideas and not the same as all the dxd fanfic authors.

azriel69
azriel69Lv4azriel69

wilhelm: well,hello son sirzech:

7Apophis
7ApophisLv57Apophis

Well I was interested to see the relationship progress between GrannyVene and MC but honestly reading this chap felt weird. Maybe its just me being silly but I'm still all set for the lewd next chap.

LoweCypher
LoweCypherLv4LoweCypher

At the start, author got respect... But then decided to throw out all that dignity to satisfy those who only come for the seggs. Bravo, well played. Just another Tuesday in webnovel where majority of ffs is full of harem and unhinged indecency. 👏👏👏

Andressalazar128
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I like your story but this chapter in particular makes me uncomfortable I don't know why

Redmoon_Cabal
Redmoon_CabalLv4Redmoon_Cabal

Turning a great MC into someone with zero self control who is only after new Pokémon. This is so sad.

DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsLv10DogLickerGods

At first everyone was waiting for the MC to meet his father, Sirzechs. But until now the author has continued to extend unnecessary chapters so that people are getting bored because what they are waiting for has not happened until now. The MC is just busy getting women from various worlds like an ordinary harem protagonist and the progress of the dxd plot is very slow.

Shadowknight_950
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Aldrighi
AldrighiLv13Aldrighi

Well this is dissapointing.

Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3Johnathon_Magus

Yeah DXD is taking a long time I don’t mind though I feel there need’s to be a balance with MC actually going to different world’s. There’s a plethora of game and anime oriented world’s MC can explore. Chainsaw man or Jujustu Kaisen would be cool. This fic has only scratched the surface. Also more variety and actually utilizeing underatted DXD character’s that don’t get much screen time or from the manga. Why not Slash/Dog’s?

Badzingan
BadzinganLv4Badzingan

Thanks for the chapter.. Poor Will he really want a family.. already got 2 mother figures.. now finally a grandmother...

CkLance
CkLanceLv14CkLance

Wilhelm to Sirzechs: LOOK AT ME! I AM THE FATHER NOW!

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

tbh I feel like this happend way too fast for my taste

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Aiden10
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First! Thx for the chapter

Zeus_Sora
Zeus_SoraLv2Zeus_Sora

good chapter sensei, and do not pay attention to the stupidities of others you are on the right track, you earned a faithful follower and for those who complain that delicate are , That part of demons do not understand, depaso the ex-husband of Venelana thought more about politics than about having a romantic relationship so there was never love , And that's something that willhem can offer Venelana real love so don't complain.