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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

LordInsanity
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You wont pair rin and thorum right? Also idk if you mentioned this or not, but did rin and artoria learn the language before hand or are using some sort of magic?

Smoll_FuHua
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+2 Same

KamaCytra:I think it might make me drop if that happens(

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Ballad
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Kitsune_Raijin
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Thanks for the chap, your work always brings a smile to my face 😁

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WonderLife
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thanks for the chapter , nice bro moment

RynerFGO
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Shishouuuuuu T-T

perser_112
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Serana coming soon? (vampire princess from skyrim)

Mirio_kun
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I hope he will go to Naruto world đŸ€© Any hope you will add pyrrha to his harem

Scarlet_reaper
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Thanks for the chapter

Peace12345
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Oh it will be hilarious when Thorum meets Kunou. He will be the best uncle ever. Also their interactions here were hilarious, great friends.

Winscore52
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mr author will Wilhelm tell his heroic story with roman and his merrymen how they heroicly save a city if so imagine it going like this i was at a tavern(bar) i met a group of great people and the leader of that group was a person name roman his quite famous (infamous) in the region for his deeds while talking with roman and his group about there plan to going to a prosperous city to deal a great blow to the crime leader of that city for in that city theres a woman who is crime lord making the innocent people of that city suffer and currently there's a tournament there were warriors from many places gather for honor and the reward our plan was to go to the city join the tournament and join it to spread the message that roman and his group dont fear the crime lord of that places making the people know that she isn't someone to be afraid off and to use that distraction to deal a great blow to her things were doing great it was the semifinals when suddenly soldiers start appearing disturbing the place those soldiers were in cahoots with that evil woman they were there to put an end to roman and his merrymen but roman and his men didn't surrender they fought hard and they were going to escape when the soldiers bring in there monsters they were iron flying monsters(bullhead) who can cause powerful damage not only did they bring it to the city those very same soldiers use those weapons to attack the city causing great damage to the city and its people those very same soldiers who should protect and create order were there collaborating with a crime lord and were attacking a city the same city were there was a festivities with many people there celebrating how could they call them selves soldiers now roman won't stand for that so what he did was pulled out his legendary sword and throwed it to one of the monster thus killing it the other monsters were so shocked they were stund with them stund he went to one of the monster and took control of it with his merrymen leading them out of the city so no more destruction befall on the citizen of the city and with that saving the people now while leading those monsters he with gang were able to take care of the monsters following him and with that he went back to his city with people cheering him in that city went to the tavern(bar) celebrate with his men then after celebrating he and his merrymen went to hiding not only did he deal a great blow to that evil woman he also save a whole city and its citizens told those citizen to not be afraid but also showed who are soldiers who were willing to collaborate with that woman but also point there weapons and attack a city with festivities while people were celebrating well sorry if there's grammar mistakes

SyncMaster940
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Thorum - uncle... hehe... Thanks for chap!

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MasterDragonGod
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Thanks for the chapter

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daoist832572
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Nice

Lucikiel
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Gracias por el capitulo

Almas_Farhan_Arnob
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I want atg cultivation fanfic here

DDamian
DDamianLv3DDamian

The Waifus are nice but this friendship is just better for some reason.

0bsidi4nN0vaArc
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good read, lol Ddraig spreading his wings while the albino newt is stuck in 1 world

Batcard
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I wonder if he will join our MC after the story “ends” in Skyrim. He will be pretty powerful then and wouldn’t be a burden to him either. Love the friendship between them

Federico_Sanchez
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Arsene_Holmes
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Thanks for the chapter