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Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Vongrak
VongrakLv4Vongrak

I suggest putting an (*) in the title. A nice little warning people can check if they actually care

AlexTravels
AlexTravelsLv4AlexTravels

Azazel created some gender-bender machine,right? Will always can grab it and use it on Qrow and James. "You wanted magic, haa? Here, take it!"

Nyeh_IamSkeletor
Nyeh_IamSkeletorLv4Nyeh_IamSkeletor

cool

AlexTravels
AlexTravelsLv4AlexTravels

Meanwhile Will:

daoist832572
daoist832572Lv4daoist832572

William a woman jajajaja

Fruitful_Gaming
Fruitful_GamingLv13Fruitful_Gaming

I say label the NSFW content bits please and thank you

OfficialDavidDough
OfficialDavidDoughLv3OfficialDavidDough

but hey it's just a theory......A GAME THEORY!! thanks for watching!

RynerFGO
RynerFGOLv4RynerFGO

Guess Wil got his look from his “dad”

Mamonga_az
Mamonga_azLv2Mamonga_az

Thank you for the Chapter!

RuriRuri
RuriRuriLv2RuriRuri

thanks for the chapter, sorry to say but actually when the interlude is better to discuss the main world of mc, even though he has a kaleidoscope san can travel to the multiverse he should still be tied to his original world (like zeletrech), and so far I see MC doesn't even care a bit with the world (I even thought if the original world was destroyed, mc wouldn't care) doesn't mean anything I enjoy your book and I'm just giving advice on that

Federico_Sanchez
Federico_SanchezLv4Federico_Sanchez

Will:

Ah2zee
Ah2zeeLv13Ah2zee

Just say at the beginning of the chapter it contains lewds

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Gracias por el capítulo

NotLastApril
NotLastAprilLv4NotLastApril

Where is da lemon?!

Vasil_Mihov
Vasil_MihovLv3Vasil_Mihov

i hope they get stabbed

rle8od
rle8odLv4rle8od

Add to wanted posters that will is a trans person with a operation will comes back to see it draig making fun of him

Bird0fHermes9
Bird0fHermes9Lv5Bird0fHermes9

Not opposed to some more lewd content, but I have other sources if I want to get my lewd fix. I am here mostly for the very entertaining way you write Wil and his interactions with other characters.

ThiccThighs
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Thx for chap

AllBullshit
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that conclusion... is so ridiculous... i can't....

Redzeth
RedzethLv13Redzeth

Just put an asterix in the chapter title so we know it’s coming and can persue it in a more private setting