DMadLord
well now that vol 3 has come to an end there is some criticism i would like to lay down on this novel, and that is the writing style of this novel im not sure when it started but i know i started to notice it during mid vol 2 and it’s painful it makes reading this novel more of a chore rather then a pleasant experience. The problem is repetition, like the author writes the same thing three different times in different ways, it’s like an adult repeating something over and over again to a kid. everything is over explained and it makes reading really awkward and annoying as least to me. i don’t believe everything has to be over explained try using context clues and having faith that the people reading your im smart enough to add pieces together on their own and as the author you leave enough clues to confirm it or deny it, these can also lead to more engagement in the community. not sure if this is just a me problem but it is a problem i have. hopefully this helps improve the novel 🤞🏾