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Comments of chapter undefined of GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

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ismaelmaster10
ismaelmaster10Lv6ismaelmaster10

Haha! GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

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Doubleline
DoublelineLv15Doubleline

Are you burnt out? you should take a break for however long you want if you are burnt out. if you aren't burnt out but still a bit fatigued you should take a week or two long break to recharge. Great story so far I'm looking forward to what comes next.

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LazyCant
LazyCantLv15LazyCant

Just do what you thinks best for the story, if that means time off so be it

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Just_evilness
Just_evilnessLv15Just_evilness

Do whatever you think will help the story I’ll still read whenever you’re ready

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The_dungeater
The_dungeaterLv14The_dungeater

I’m not an expert but you should take some time to rest for a couple of weeks to feel as good as new. Stay healthy

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Heavenly_Supreme
Heavenly_SupremeLv4Heavenly_Supreme

Thanks for the chapter

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UED
UEDLv4UED

Good chapter

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MrSquare
MrSquareLv14MrSquare

too much repeat

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dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14dylan_pyle

have you got outline like you did for Vol3 yet,I think to get a higher quality story you need to plan it out.But if your a couple days off,I'm not sure if goes against the contract you signed

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Eclipceborn
EclipcebornLv13Eclipceborn

Thanks for the chapter!

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Krombopulos
KrombopulosLv15Krombopulos

well now that vol 3 has come to an end there is some criticism i would like to lay down on this novel, and that is the writing style of this novel im not sure when it started but i know i started to notice it during mid vol 2 and it’s painful it makes reading this novel more of a chore rather then a pleasant experience. The problem is repetition, like the author writes the same thing three different times in different ways, it’s like an adult repeating something over and over again to a kid. everything is over explained and it makes reading really awkward and annoying as least to me. i don’t believe everything has to be over explained try using context clues and having faith that the people reading your im smart enough to add pieces together on their own and as the author you leave enough clues to confirm it or deny it, these can also lead to more engagement in the community. not sure if this is just a me problem but it is a problem i have. hopefully this helps improve the novel 🤞🏾