Comments of chapter undefined of GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
DMadLord
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chapter after chapter of infodumps, this is stupid. to entice readers to keep reading you need to first show the promise of a good story, bombarding your readers with infodump after infodump before the story even gets a chance to start was a dumb move. I would suggest rewriting the early chapters. at this point, I'm skipping through paragraph after paragraph and I don't even feel like I'm missing something relevant.
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DMadLord
Question for author:1)will this type of info dumps be frequent in story ahead?2)will he reincarnate in the following chapters ? cuz he's already at 100 and without struggling from 0 to 100 it wouldn't be fun .3) and if he will be even stronger than now , then i can't understand what will be the struggle ? because strong becoming stronger is no fun at all. cuz then side characters becomes insignificant which is terrible for any story.
