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GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

DMadLord

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Mirodin
MirodinLv12Mirodin

I dont know, somehow dont like the narrator. Too much "you see". It is a very weird way of adressing the reader. It was especially jarring in the first episode, where the author talks about all the thing you can see etc. So it was : you see, there you could see what the eye could see for the beings that could see... Very clunky.

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Rezx
RezxLv13Rezx

it was a unique start at first but now its bad cause ur just dumping info

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DaoistIN8Tbb
DaoistIN8TbbLv2DaoistIN8Tbb

I don't like the way the narrative is told, but we'll pass it along with a cup of coffee. I hope your story doesn't disappoint me

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laylag145
laylag145Lv15laylag145

I’ve been teased about the promised protagonist for three chapters now.

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Zerus
ZerusLv15Zerus

Thanks for the chapter

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Bloo_dReaper
Bloo_dReaperLv12Bloo_dReaper

Je ne suis pas du même avis de certaines personnes, je trouve cela assez intéressant de commencer directement en montrant les grands pouvoirs qui peuvent exister, même si c'est assez complexe surtout si on ne connais pas ce type de novel. Cependant c'est plutôt original car contrairement à d'autres novel on attend pas minimum 1,5k chapitres pour lire ce niveau de puissance... Mais je comprends aussi l'avis des autres car en effet ce n'est pas le début le plus excitant ;-)

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