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Comments of chapter undefined of Zero Fate against the world

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I_Mstrbte_to_Hntai
I_Mstrbte_to_HntaiLv1I_Mstrbte_to_Hntai

Some advice, many of the chapters felt off and amateurish (no offense) and I couldnt find out why until I realized, the transitions in between words, sentences, and actions could do better. Vocabulary could be updated, and some sentence structure is redundant like 'it is' which could be effectively shortened or just changed in general

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Bibliophileaddict
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So it seems there is a higher chance of MC spending less time in a world that doesn’t have the right factors to maximize skill growth. Meaning this world has some limits on physical enhancements (assuming you don’t go for some top tier cybernetics, nano machines and such). But getting such enhancements would be risky as they could easily interfere when he gets back to reality (assuming they would carry over). So will he be able to stay longer after the mission completion or just head back? Would it even be worthwhile to stay here an extended amount if he can? He probably won’t stay even if he can due to the uncertainty of whether the time difference is negligible or not. Needs to use this as another sample to more safely determine whether he can expect future classes to have a short time away no matter how long he subjectively stays. In any case, the Trait Sword Heart is a must to carry over to the main class. While it is subtle it should have great effects.

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ABAB
ABABLv1ABAB

I think that he got a toaster

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Axolt
AxoltLv13Axolt

Author, I think it would be pretty neat if the MC went to a world like persona. This is because persona are the manifestation of the user's psyche(like his mind stats). This would give the MC's mind stat more use in battles plus a persona would augment the user's physical abilities. Hence, this allow the MC to give a boost to all of his stats due to his increase mind stat plus the MC can pick up resistances to certain elements.

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WanderingWeeb
WanderingWeebLv14WanderingWeeb

Nice chapter

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RabbitBorn13
RabbitBorn13Lv5RabbitBorn13

He got a metal gear!!! I just find it funny if he got a Mecha in a fantasy world.

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Dominic_Zibuda
Dominic_ZibudaLv4Dominic_Zibuda

In relation to a future class, Did you know that the webtoon God of high school has a mobile game? I found that out after researching some things, and I think that it would be an easy way to make him more powerful and be a way to intertwine gods or spirits into the story.

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DANIEL_LESAN
DANIEL_LESANLv4DANIEL_LESAN

Thanks by the chapter.

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Bibliophileaddict
BibliophileaddictLv13Bibliophileaddict

Sword sheath has been called sheet (like a sheet of paper) on occasion.

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onion_ninja
onion_ninjaLv5onion_ninja

next chap when?

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bigbahg
bigbahgLv1bigbahg

I just hope that he won't forget about Hunter class later in the novel

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Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

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Daoist538472
Daoist538472Lv4Daoist538472

Thanks for the chapter.

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no_panick
no_panickLv14no_panick

Thanks I do enjoy this

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MAGE_OF_FLOWER
MAGE_OF_FLOWERLv4MAGE_OF_FLOWER

Thanks for chapter UmU

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zeez2020
zeez2020Lv5zeez2020

the blade it's self is very op if he got it even in a world of magic it's still a blade that can cut through matter right ?!

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mike1b
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Author if you are going to have him bring gear like an exoskeleton back to the fantasy world i forget the name of it you should have him make a way for him to charge gear like the exoskeleton before he gets brought back.