Hmm it's okay I guess, the interactions in to be in more detail. There some RI fanfics which have done a wonderful job at that, do read and find some inspiration
reducing the information in each chapter will improve the reading experience, to be honest, the info in each chapter is very distracting, I know you made it look as if your chapters look long, but didn't always like that.
thanks for the chapter
it seems your power stone section is closed ? I can't give PS.
btw the story is great so far I hope you could upload longer chapter đđ