Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter An Elf's Ascension

Why does he care about Dumbledore? In my opinion, if he wants to help he should do it from the shadows. And maybe troll people and events, and get money and books (steal). While this is quite unique reincarnation story, it would be much better and original if he wasn’t participating in original plot. Well, at least officially. But that is definitely harder to write, so not many authors of fanfics choose that road, unfortunately. HP world have soo much potential, but apparently people lack imagination. I unfortunately don’t have any talent in writing… soo I can’t really criticise too much…

You should post on the Johnny test fan fic that you have a new story up to bring more readers 😉😉

is this dude gonna become like licht?

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Thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter and You have the making of a great story although you have a lot of grammar issues currently.

thanks for chap

Great chapter wish there was more chapters