Comments of chapter undefined of Gamble in a dying world

Good start. The narration is done in a very nice way and leads us to immediately connect to the characters. Writing is very much above average, though rare grammar mistakes remain(could be easily solved using Grammarly or a proofreader though). Good job, really. And nice cover.

Wow! the world building! I hope he survives that pain.

Love the world building and how you describe the scenes perfectly. Chapter is a bit long but that's good too, to get all the information out first.

I love this already. I love love it so much T T I'm happy for the mc achieving his dream...but the disaster that took everything for him broke my heart. Very nice start although it was a little long.

Okay.... This is awesome. No cap!

interesting Story telling. looking forward to how the novel will Continue^^

your storytelling is quite amazing, I just love how you describe each event as it unfolds 😍❤❤❤

Wow 😮 😮 Good beginning. I have read your other book and got a similar feeling. You really know how to engage the readers

Don't scare me with a five year COVID pandemic...

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Awesome! Long and perfect 👌💯

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Great first Chapter! Loved the description a lot and even the tragic events were nice!