Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: World on Fire

The gift was the thing that made me kept this in my library even with the long wait. tbh I would've loved to see the poem but this is good too

Beautifully written ! From my point of view , this chapter is perfect ! Continue the good job and thanks for the story!

Nice Part, but it feel's like a Story before is missing. A part of an meeting/latters something in that direction.

Nice chapter but I kinda forgot the story...so I think I should reread this again.

Please, hope he confess after he come back🥺

Not bad, considering thier age it was well done. Wonder how she will explain to the girls when they see what Tom got her.

Did she not question his drastically different looks??

Welcome back and beautiful chapter, though I really did enjoy the chapter I'm just afraid of when we will see some more of the main plot with the gap between posts. Really enjoying your fic, and I'm addicted to it so want more and more haha 😂

Not sure how to feel about the change in writing style honestly. It's a good chapter, nice writing no doubt. I'm just not sure about the shift in writing style. Feels a bit off to me. I'll probably get used to it if you continue writing like that though. Not like I'm gonna drop a good read just cause of that

I mean it was written quite well, but I don't know.... it took the rawness of the moment out of it, sometimes lesser words are more impactful

Truly amazing I love the way you right and how you portray the scene.

I'm waiting for the new episode to come, I'm very curious

Thanks for the chapter 10/10

Thanks for the New Chapter Author-san... a great work, I hope to see that poem... one day... tille next time~

That was beautifully written and Thank you for the chapter.

Oh...Welcome back.