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Comments of chapter undefined of Nurarihyon in DxD

YoungestKing
YoungestKingLv11YoungestKing

I feel the first one while immature didnt need to be chamged, however he had the oppressing pressence of a young master this time around which was cool, I like Tsurara the yuki forgit her name being the one to intimidate rhem the first go round, overall great work yoi cant please everyone so dont expect too

FcKyOu
FcKyOuLv2FcKyOu

hm much better I hope it is maintained and there is no childish nature when dealing with potential enemies

Dukluk
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LuciferDFallN1
LuciferDFallN1Lv4LuciferDFallN1

much better! well done author sama!

ManSpider11
ManSpider11Lv1ManSpider11

That was a lot better!! and author you can still make fillers and chapters that really have no relevance to the story just make it make sense, and make it fit the theme and timeline of your story.

BestNero
BestNeroLv14BestNero

Nero was fine with the original, but this is way better honestly.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

perfect.

Venerable_Read3r
Venerable_Read3rLv5Venerable_Read3r

Good he is the young leader of the youkai he shouldn't be childish and shouldn't be afraid of trouble

RagingAsura
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MoonTree
MoonTreeLv10MoonTree

the rewrite you have done is much better

ARIO_VANISH
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HornyPatrol
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GluttonousAngel
GluttonousAngelLv14GluttonousAngel

This chapter is a lot better than that from before. Thx for the great chapter

Suzaku_
Suzaku_Lv4Suzaku_

Thanks for the chapter

VinsmokeReiju_SIMP
VinsmokeReiju_SIMPLv10VinsmokeReiju_SIMP

Happy strawhats for excellent chapter

Naginn
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Thanks for the chapter

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

LiYao
LiYaoLv7LiYao

love your rewrite chapter. much better i say. hope that you now know that there is a time and right place to act childish or stupid. be sure to know the right mood or atmosphere so that it wont be akward, irritating or else it wont piece together

Aaron313
Aaron313Lv14Aaron313

I give credit where credit is due. much better

HOS
HOSLv4HOS

Well done author, it's a lot better now.

Deathlock
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