for reasons of deposit to the bank, mc can make magic that makes what he does seem normal, so if he deposits a very large amount of money he will not be doubted, as from other people's point of view he is normal even though he always deposits a lot of money at a time and also a suggestion if you can please use a third person point of view to write
rwd ogre gang is scum you know, almost all blackmail and rapist there.. this just like old protag than. Naive... rather than brainwashing them, i prefer send them to jail and root in there... For 100 years.. as for parents and siblings, why dont make them go bankroupt ? and before that, let them hand over the late grandparent property to MC ? but all in all this is your story and im glad enough you make fanfic for this series. btw dont forget night and others pet.. thanks for the chappy ...