Bruh !!this is fanfic right why are rip-poping the original like some fight sences with monster's you can copy some fight but with little twist like new move or totally something else . and can you make chapter's little long with more progressing in main story . because it's is a multiverse travel story so it can have alot to do in terms of" story skeleton " BTW it is my personal opinion because there also alot guys who didn't read the original one by miku sensei . and knows following events But bro "all in all " it quite interesting it also in my bringes list for future when this fanfic will a lot of chapter's I am saving it for future . keep the good work and update more
it is big plotholes by original author "miku" how koari see and recognise a person by its eyes , how people how easily accept or adapt with yuuya sudden drastic change or how koari able to speak another world language with any skill . original novel was filled with big plotholes . But still original was fun to read I stop where yuuya reveals his another World secret to koari I hope author-kun would modify and make this fanfic long with hundreds of chapter's