Comments of chapter undefined of MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
NunuXD
Chapter comments71
Seems pretty good, just... I don't quite like the first opening paragraph and sentence. Mc is pretty suicidal and seems to encourage death as a positive thing at that point. It's disturbing too that he seems to equate death with living a next life in another world. As much as author deny, admit it or just say that it's mere fictions. Books or to be more specific "stories" are not only meant to entertain but also to influence. I really dislike it when author or readers deny and dismiss some negative things within a book as non issue just because it was just mere "fictions". Internet is too wide spread. Kids whose pretty much are blank pages are easily influenced by what they hear and see. I refuse to believe thay children nowadays don't have access to those downer stories. So i hope that newer writer atleast try to adjust and think more of their intended audience when deciding a topic specially when a fic like this that contains mild sensitive content isn't tagged as r-18.
