Comments of chapter undefined of Honkai Impact : The Rise Herrscher of Shadow
Honkai Impact : The Rise Herrscher of Shadow
The_Hanged_Man1
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Author, I'm sure many readers will drop reading this novel after what happened. But I do understand why you want to reduce the number of girls aiming for kouro but I think the way you did it this time was kinda forced. Still, I like your work and I know you worked hard to make it. It's just, that please don't repeat what you did with Ana to other girls you want to remove from aiming for Kouro. I'm not saying you shouldn't reduce the girls but I suggest you do it in another way, not like how you did it with Ana and Owl. I suggest you make it so Kouro will slowly be aware of how some girls surrounding him like Kiana, Mei, Ayame, etc have feelings for him. Or you can have him realize or develop feelings for a select few of the girls so that he will be mindful of his actions towards other girls in the future. You also should quickly decide who the girls you want to be with Kouro that way you can focus on developing their relationship more and not mindlessly get other girls to like him otherwise it would be disastrous for you as the author. My friend was also a writer of fanfic that has a similar premise to your novel, it was a harem too. But he had made too many girls like his mc that he didnt know what to do, in the end, he had to drop it. I can see the same problem with how this novel is going. Anyway, thank you for your hard work. I really enjoy your novel, it's a great novel.
