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Comments of chapter undefined of What I become villain in novel with netori system?

Averynyaa
AverynyaaLv3Averynyaa

this has been a year now but, I think it's really bad when you write it as mc just made a dumb mistake with his iq, and then suddenly system would make him do things which is unnecessary, but if it's, then you could have just done it from the start where there's already a function in the system like that "forcing him to do things, and if he failed there'll be consequences for his greater good". just my opinion, but well, i assume this is necessary for future development and plot(?)

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Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

unnecessary actions only for character development, for example you can't develop mc character without having to force mc with that system, after all mc's iq is already high why is it still stupid, then you can develop it through other actions after making love to those girls.

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Nontr
NontrLv12Nontr

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Matias_Varas
Matias_VarasLv3Matias_Varas

No leí la novela pero muy bien, siempre que leo cundo un MC va matando o conquistando mujeres por doquiera apenas recibe su dedo dorado llámese sistema o reencarnación o lo que sea, a pesar de que lo disfruto no me llega a gustar por completo

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

+++++++++++++++

RndmPrsn999
RndmPrsn999Lv14RndmPrsn999

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Percival41
Percival41Lv4Percival41

As long as you don't enslave mc this story will keep flowing

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Lucifer_777
Lucifer_777Lv3Lucifer_777

Ок

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David_Vargas_1673
David_Vargas_1673Lv1David_Vargas_1673

ok otro mc q esclavo de sistema ... no me sorprende y gracia por Cap. una pregunta mc robara al Mio naruse y María naruse ?

THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4THIZZGATOR

the system is ruining the entire story. plenty of other ways to get a character to develop than to make it a slave to the system. idc if you change it later the fact it even appears is an issue. it shows a lack of creativity which imo is a fatal flaw in a writer.

Infinite999
Infinite999Lv1Infinite999

Good explanation 😄👍