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Comments of chapter undefined of ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist

Dark_Zero
Dark_ZeroLv13Dark_Zero

I really want to know if he manages to revive his dad or not, after all the reason for his obsession to become an alchemist is because of his father

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Xushi
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even though I haven't got to this point of reading yet, I think you can try to write a completely new novel, and not only fan-fic based on others anime or manga. but I still appreciated the work(at least where I am reading right now.

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ManasCiel
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Thanks for the all the chapters! It certainly was enjoyable for most of it! Hope the next one is also good! 😅👍

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fake_sage
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I had a lot of fun reading this story, many thanks author-san.

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WizardMouse
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Thanks for sticking with it and not abandoning it like some authors. Can't wait for your next book!!

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Izuki_Midorya
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thank you for writhing this novel its a great novel

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DaoistTalion187
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Thanks for the great ride.

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Falangeallntrusion
FalangeallntrusionLv11Falangeallntrusion

Thanks for all the chapters and I had a fun time reading it, though my interest did fall during the later chapters, especially when there were going be more than one LI but all in all I consider it good story.

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Daoist4J05HD
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Thank you for making this wonderful story

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ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for everything

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RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

This has been an absolutely amazing story so far from what I’ve read I’m so happy to be here for the end of it though I’m sad to see it go

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Anthony_Higgin
Anthony_HigginLv4Anthony_Higgin

Thanks for the chapter and thanks for this great 👍 story. Whichever new story you write ✍️, I’m definitely looking forward to reading it so again thank for this great story and good luck in your future endeavors.

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Glitz1
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Thank you for the chapter. The story was a great ride. I'm honestly glad you kept up with the work despite the lack of an audience. In the end great work. I'm honestly hoping for an after story or something. Nothing too long 2-5 chapters showcasing their life on earth and how Ivan's mother reacted to the whole thing. Either way great work. The next work I would vote for would be Marvel: I am a cat

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Granville4554
Granville4554Lv15Granville4554

Thanks for the chapters 🙏 it was a great ride and I'm glad we made it through the end! Honestly my interest in it did taper off though. for me i guess it would be after he met Yue. It felt like it wasn't the crazy mad alchemist/scientist exploring the world to become a better alchemist and instead followed the usual shounen troupe where everything seemed to always fall in line for the mc. where he'd meet the right person or get the right equipment/power up to accomplish something at the right moment (with limited struggle in the greater scheme of things). it was just a straight linear path to the end. no left or right, no set backs or heavy life lessons learned (at or for a cost), no real sacrifice(s) to achieve that hard earned victory. no crazy twist like they failed in the future and the hardened battle weary survivors pooled together and used their concept magic to warn their past selves to give them a better chance or that they themselves went to their (alternate?) future and saw how they failed or won but at a huge cost (like the mc's sacrifice or Yue dying which makes him lose his drive) which could've spiced things up (maybe for a future endeavor?) but yea I'm in no way bashing on the story. in fact I really liked it otherwise I wouldn't read it till the end but my honest thoughts are as I mentioned earlier. Thanks again for the novel!

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Kostya_Dolgushev
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Osamu_00
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Thank you very much for creating this awesome book! I look forward to reading your future works!

Ramen_Sensei_MC
Ramen_Sensei_MCLv14Ramen_Sensei_MC

Story slapped hard AF!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!

Pyeano
PyeanoLv2Pyeano

⟟ liked it a lo thank you so much for your time and effortt

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

I think the final objective should have changed instead of remaining the same as the original MC of going back to earth, where much more trouble awaits, where they would basically have to live in hiding and when they were discovered they would surely be hunted down by humanity, as it is almost impossible for the whole group keep the magic hidden, I would rather they go to a higher level world like HSDXD or some other.

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️