ArdoAleister
Thank you for the chapter. The story was a great ride. I'm honestly glad you kept up with the work despite the lack of an audience. In the end great work. I'm honestly hoping for an after story or something. Nothing too long 2-5 chapters showcasing their life on earth and how Ivan's mother reacted to the whole thing. Either way great work. The next work I would vote for would be Marvel: I am a cat
Thanks for the chapters đ it was a great ride and I'm glad we made it through the end! Honestly my interest in it did taper off though. for me i guess it would be after he met Yue. It felt like it wasn't the crazy mad alchemist/scientist exploring the world to become a better alchemist and instead followed the usual shounen troupe where everything seemed to always fall in line for the mc. where he'd meet the right person or get the right equipment/power up to accomplish something at the right moment (with limited struggle in the greater scheme of things). it was just a straight linear path to the end. no left or right, no set backs or heavy life lessons learned (at or for a cost), no real sacrifice(s) to achieve that hard earned victory. no crazy twist like they failed in the future and the hardened battle weary survivors pooled together and used their concept magic to warn their past selves to give them a better chance or that they themselves went to their (alternate?) future and saw how they failed or won but at a huge cost (like the mc's sacrifice or Yue dying which makes him lose his drive) which could've spiced things up (maybe for a future endeavor?) but yea I'm in no way bashing on the story. in fact I really liked it otherwise I wouldn't read it till the end but my honest thoughts are as I mentioned earlier. Thanks again for the novel!
I think the final objective should have changed instead of remaining the same as the original MC of going back to earth, where much more trouble awaits, where they would basically have to live in hiding and when they were discovered they would surely be hunted down by humanity, as it is almost impossible for the whole group keep the magic hidden, I would rather they go to a higher level world like HSDXD or some other.