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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Hollow Family -HP Fanfic

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Rise of the Hollow Family -HP Fanfic

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ninjapanda37
ninjapanda37Lv5ninjapanda37

Ty for the story! Does this mean he's lost control of the ship? You may want to go back and edit Toms dialogue a bit. I hope he tells his parents what happened to him.

2yr
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Player_Tenason
Player_TenasonAuthorPlayer_Tenason

The ship is his. but he will have to find another way to control it without the sword.

2yr
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The_Bean_God
The_Bean_GodLv13The_Bean_God

I was kinda hoping for Cotton to get the powers of The Other from Dishonored, that's what I thought of when you had the symbol on the back of his hand.

2yr
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Flightless_Man
Flightless_ManLv3Flightless_Man

Thanks for the chapter

2yr
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DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story

2yr
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