WutDelusional
I looked at the comments... And they are negative af, well, I don't know cause I'm reading the edited chapters. I would like to say that the start is great and I'm interested to read further chapters. There is more that I want to say, that is that you(Sir Author) wrote Gojo's voice as mocking... ?? Allow me to clear this for you, that Gojo's voice is not MOCKING.. Its just mocking for his enemies like we all have seen in his fight against Gojo, in the anime. Actually, his voice is CAREFREE. And that's all.
what a useless man he is. hahahaha I would not even care If a person die in unknown person die in front me. And why is he so useless, is green eye really oh so great or something. Do you really needs "friends" or something. He can easily have normal childhood but he is just useless. Why do you have to tell useless people of your power to begin with huh and the pov it mentioned is so useless and full of masochismm. It's not wattpad its webnovel okay use a better pov to show a perosn life and its so edgy like every bad things had happened to him huh. Author is masochisticc to write like this and character is useless it can be easily seen.
Enjoying the story so far, but I'd recommend the use of Grammarly or Quilbot (Quilbot says that there were apparently around 170 grammatical errors in this chapter and over 50 in the last); I tend to use Quilbot since you can just input the text and fix all errors by pressing 1 button, though Grammarly seems to be better quality wise but requires more time.
Nunca ponen velo. No entiendo por qué se queja en lo comentarios, si está realidad, el mc no puede tener habilidades, por qué jujutsu está ocultado de la gente normal, y el solo tiene energía maldita, las malficiones siguen la energía maldita como las emociones así que se encuentran en cualquier lado, creo que el capítulo es lo más real, si fuera un reencarnado sería ridículo y patético pero el no es.