Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
Cultureshock_poet
Chapter comments6
A massive amount of info dumps straight from the get go. Sometimes it's better to slowly introduce your readers into the world. However, I will keep reading. I just want to know one thing...what is the personality of the main character?
There are phases of character development he goes through. He starts of as a normal 17-year-old with a blessed strategic prowess. He is resilient, optimistic and often considers ideal solutions to real world problems. He loves his father the most. Currently, he is a ruthless killing machine, he's manipulative and for the most of time tries to suppress his emotions (another voice inside his head). I hope this much is enough. You'll get a much better understanding of his character in further reading.
Thieving:Yeah it can be. No problem. Also I would really like to know the mc’s personality. I’ve read a lot of stories on here and I’ve been massively disappointed. So, getting this out of the way is a good start.
