Comments of chapter undefined of Another World Chronicles
Another World Chronicles
Dimas_Pratama
Chapter comments2
it read like 3 diffrent stories made by 3 people the mixed together in anakward blend. feels confusing to read even though each part not bad, but reads like a mess. that why simple is better since it hard following complex stories. that to fast throw too much incoherent content around. solution keep it simple.
thanks for giving review honestly. actually, I made stories to focus on 4 main characters, and each character trying to build up into good development, to make character feels insecure when they got similar situation in real life. and yes, I made complex stories to make interesting and feel sympathy for character (though I admit, some of them kinda messy) anyway, thank you again[img=recommend]
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