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Comments of chapter undefined of Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library

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This chapter could have gone better. He has always done things himself but the moment he gets a backer it changes, he could have simply used the destiny technique to teleport to the clan before they sent the 4 aperiture guy, store it in that seal and taking his time to fight them retreat or do whatever he wants or has he forgotten that he has a child and wife in the clan. I curious what he plans to do if they decided to take his clan hostage just in case he has some tricks. Up to this point I loved the novel but the sudden change left me disappointed cuz he said he prefers to rely on himself ( I’m talking about dealing with problems or inheritances)but the moment he gets a backer he stops using his brain and power properly to me personally this chapter dropped the novel from a 10 to a six

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Correction ( I’m talking about dealing with problems not inheritances)

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If you wanted to speed up the ending, you could have said that after he killed those guy attacking his clan one of them told him about a supreme sovereign tomb that he found but could not harvest because of the arrays wanting to borrow the power of the arrays to kill ye xiao ….

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