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The Story of Circe was nicely done, I also believe this to be one of the author's best wrritten chapter. I can feel the flow and formation of the story as the build-up blended well as I read. In Edward's case of fixing up Circe's problem though, I beleive he could only done it with all the available arsenal he had knowledge wise though as I beleive at his level to have atm.
I dont understand, in every story and the mythology even, the greek gods are so cruel and evil, rather the embodiment of evil, why not destroy them. I think the only way to show a character being of good and just alignment is by making him a kratos, if you you have to recount the evils of the greek pantheon. If you want a peaceful and forgiving mc for the greeks even, then please don't recount the greek pantheon's evils.